Good story bud! Again, your writing keeps improving. I do have a question though. Have you thought of branching out from the zombie-esque stories you usually write to try something different? Personally, I abhor zombies...they give me the creeping willies! Maybe try a different angle for your horror stories? There's so much evil out there just waiting to be written (that doesn't have zombies.../shudder
)! Keep up the good works bud!
Good luck and good gaming,
"If you can't stun them with your tactical brilliance, baffle them with your superior grasp of BS."
"I refuse to engage in a battle of wits with an unarmed man."
Well, seeing as how you capitalize your characters, use proper grammar and punctuation, I'd say you qualify.