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post #2 of (permalink) Old 03-02-08, 07:22 AM
zboy234
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sounds good my only nitpicks are grammar and the lack of detail in the story, like the first paragraph.

WE HAVE COME FOR YOUR.....*necron warrior turns around to the necron behind him* Hey Bob? what did we come for?!

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