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post #9 of (permalink) Old 05-07-18, 02:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Myen'Tal View Post
Shanna found herself stranded beneath the shadow of a crimson mountain. Her eyes fluttered open with gentle provocation and they searched the starry night for Luriel, the Silver Moon. The stars themselves were faded and translucent, as if they were locked in the stasis of another half-veiled universe.
Why do all you people describe the sky? what was immediately in front of her before the presence of the mountain? a tree, rotted dead leaves? how would you even have a crimson mountain? is it made out of igneous rock?

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