There are grammar issues sprinkled throughout the summary and the person who wrote it chose to include kernels of humour that were at times, in my opinion, out of place.
Wow, you must find the internet a hellish place of constant agony if imperfect grammar upsets you so.
I, on the other hand, rather liked his occasional spasms of humour. To each his own.
I agree with your views on Cypher. To come so close to completing his task and find himself screwed over.