1st Place - Brother Emund, Cannon Fodder, 3pts
--You always have the best twists, and the added info at the end just put this one over the top. One of your best that I've caught.
2nd Place - Myen'Tal, Beneath Crimson Waves, 2 pts
--What can I say? A good read as always! I really like the ship angle, we always need more "Master and Commander" pieces of work!