A solid story, especially considering you were writing under pressure! Sometimes you forget that the ruinous powers are more honor bound than their rivals, I'm glad that this tale reminds me of that
I don't know if it was pressure or not, but I do tend to try and work as fast as possible.
Also glad to hear you liked it! I rather liked the idea myself as Khorne gets a lot of lore about being martial pride based but we rarely see it.