So, just letting you guys know that my app may be delayed just a toooooouch more than I originally thought, this is because I took so long to write it, and made the mistake of using the site's provided writing box, that the site actually ate it once I attempt to post it.
So yeah, about 12 paragraphs wasted because I made a dumb mistake.
You could just write a summary and add to it as you go...
Twelve paragraphs seems quite a bit for a character intro. Lol. But eh