One thing I forgot to ask. It seems like Verghard says 'boy' after ending a sentence and awful lot. Was this your intention?
If not, just be careful about repeating yourself too much.
Thank you for the warning, but yes, it is there intentionally. Veghard does lighten up a bit on Abelard, but right now Abelard is just a fresh recruit and the 'Boy' is supposed to be a denigrating comment meant to motivate Abe to be more than just a frightened boy and act like a man. Just think Drill Sargent.