Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Vancouver Washington
1st place - 3-points - Myen'Tal - Alpha Wolves
2nd place - 2 points - Brother Emund - City of Death
3rd place - 1 point - Treesniffer - One Patient Knight
Andy, I thought it was a little muddled but I got the picture pretty well. Very dark. Saving his wife was his goal, but his anger was the fault and his unwillingness to listen cost him everything. good read.
Myen, I enjoyed the set up and the determination of the clearly outnumbered. I hope there is a part two to this. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
Brother, I liked the fact that you put in two stories. I liked the first one more since I could see the stalking chess game going on.
Sniffer, I love the fact the young night never gave up on his love for the girl. Even when he knew she was to be someone elses. A good read.
We move slowly through the shrouds of fog sending pestilence before us. There is no hope! We are the Death Guard. Fear us for we are coming for you!