Only just seen your post KingAlle, it looks goof save for the following things:
You will need to wear a helmet especially if you end up on a space hulk and other hostile environments.
Your elk hide will compromise your stealth capabilities of your armour as it doesnt have the armour itself has when its repainted black.
Thats all i can think of for now. and welcome to Heresy
Already, you exalt me for my triumphs, When I ask only that you remember me for my treacheries
Victory is nothing more than survival.
It carries no weight of honour or worth beyond what we ascribe to it.
If you wish to grow wise, learn why brothers betray brothers. - Khyron, First Grand Master of the Eighth Brotherhood.