Thanks for the response. But I think you would agree then. This novel does not make one want to go start painting my chaos marines like Iron Warriors. I would rate every other Heresy Legion book higher than this one in that category.
I will admit, they had some likable characters. For the most part, it isn't a very likable legions though.
The two scenes in which McNeill could have made the legion shine made the legion look retarded.