First You have to many pts dumped into rhinos I would lose all but the dirge casters. Savings of 65 pts.
VOTLW is not a worth wile investment unless your local meta is SM heavy i would drop it. Savings 59pts.
Bale flamer both drakes BS3 not that grand
Get swords rather than Lightning claws there the same price but your sacrificing an extra attack for re rolls to wound.
Give the DP the black mace as it is much nastier than the AX in a MCs hands.
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