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post #13 of (permalink) Old 09-04-12, 03:28 AM
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Originally Posted by VulkansNodosaurus View Post
3rd place: Zinegata, Where True Loyalties Lie, 1 pt.. Occasionally, the language seemed slightly off (repetitive, maybe?)
It may be because I have been featuring the Steel Wardens in almost all of my HOEs (the only exception being the Predator tank in the "Falling Rain" contest), and the Wardens tend to be a stoic and rigid bunch.

The intent was to eventually put everything together into a short novel / novella (tentatively titled "On Duties") that will flesh out some of the battles to turn it into a more "Brotherhood of the Snake" kind of book.
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