I really have enjoyed the story so far and do hope for more soon. Keep up the great work. So far the story is set on Armageddon. Why would you change the setting and not just continue with this stage as is? Also I wrote and posted a story called 'Logan VR. Alien'. If you want you may want to check it out.
Glad you enjoyed the story! I have chosen the equatorial jungle of Armageddon as the setting. Other settings were considered in my earlier brainstorming sessions but ultimately dropped.
I'll check out your story. Cheers.
Last edited by MontytheMighty; 02-02-12 at 04:00 AM.