personally i would add more troops.
you do not have any chimmeras for them to hide in so they will die VERY quickly.
if you have the ability i would take 3 meltas (or proxy them) in the vet squad and drop the lascannon.
i would take autocannons in the infantry squads & in each command squad (the platoon should take 4 flamers other wise.
the CCS should take carapace armor & a medic if you plan to keep the plasma weapons. i think meltas & a lascannon (in a chimera/proxy) would do nicely.
basically i think that you need more guardsmen (or chimeras) so you dont get killed fast.
Originally Posted by neilbatte
if you squint the Sigmar stuff doesn't all look like the love children from a Necron and Blood Angel orgy.