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Originally Posted by Todeswind View Post
I'm an English Teacher. Yes I'm sure.
That's funny.

Dīnadan, this is one of the best stories that I have read from you. You seem to grow with each one you write.

I was able to follow along with it real well, however, I do agree with Todeswind, the paragraphs were a little to long. Break them up a bit more for those of us who have undeveloped lungs as many of us read open-mouthed exhaling as we take in every word posted before us.

Keep working and enjoying what you do. Glad you started posting, as you are very talented.

I have dyslexia, but did not know it until I was much older. My glasses fix the problem, mostly. That said, English teachers suck! LOL. I aRe Juste Kidingg, TodesWinD.!,?

You guys are just fine and very needed. Good to see you are around too.

A good reputation take a long time to build, but only a moment to destroy. Wow, that's deep! Check out the H.O.E.S. short story competition.
Other stories from Adrian.
Look up Adrian in the "Compendium" to find them. Thanks
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