Originally Posted by zabo
Oh, wait I know... its the blood on his hands huh!
Well it's this and a few other things. The girl in the car shoots the soldier and then in the next panel she is unconcious? I assume the soldier knocked her out but it's very vague. I'm also assuming the prisoner shat himself in the car, and didn't physically take a shit in the car, but the dialogue and the need for teh car to be cleaned out points towards the latter.
We're also 11 pages in and i don't know anyone's name, agenda or backstory.
I do genuinely like the art style and the framing is very well done, but to me it feels like your trying to tell too much story too quickly.