you defenately need more troops at 2000pts. Also, your HQ + his retinue is a huge points sink...more that 1/4 of your points for 5 models in a LR...Altough i like the idea of khorne termies jumping out the hatch and killing everyone...
I don't see the use of having champs with no weapons in your CSM squads. Give em a power weapon / fist, and drop the mark of slaanesh. Marks on CSM are stupid, go directly for cult troops or stick to vanilla csm. I am not a big user of pest marines, but i think they work better with plasma than flamers.
I would also drop the dreadnought and trim some points somewhere to get 2 obliterators for some flexible ranged anti tank. Then you could put 2 CCA on the defilers and send them in CC as soon as you can
Last edited by Lemmy1916; 04-24-12 at 09:18 AM.