Hey Revan, I just want to check this for the dragon. I have this:-
“Long enough to wonder when you would give up.” A hint of smugness was obvious in his voice, lyrical and honeyed as it was, before the dragon’s snout twitched once, then again. This time it was Endras who looked questioningly at his companion, seeing the hunger twinkle in Jadeus’ eyes. The dragon nodded, “Deer. To the west.” A forked tongue flickered from his mouth, tasting the air. “Eight?”
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Sighing in regret at the loss of the hunt, Endras scoured the clearing until he found his arrow, half the shaft buried in the loamy earth. Jadeus growled dismissively, flicked his tail, and started to move off after the deer, nose twitching, until Endras caught up with him and once more placed his hand on his neck. “Not this time, little one. Our Lord calls upon us, and we must respond. Soon, though. We’ll hunt again soon.”
However, I don't want to post this if you disagree